Official Movie

Before Feedback

Feedback:

Major concerns:

- blurred footage has not been improved/replaced

- there is no production/distribution logo at start of film

- there are no titles - only credits, which is completely wrong

- sound is at times poor (wind blowing into microphone)

- I thought you were going to do something about the moment when Tre swears after Saffron is killed a second time (not because of the swearing but because he seems annoyed more than shocked/upset)

After feedback

Side note: Blurriness of the final edit was one of the hardest aspects to improve as Tre was not avilable to re-record due to his departure to a different school, therefore re-shooting the scenes that were blurry, were impossible.